Saturday, May 22, 2010

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Another figure practice, played more on the strokes as my lecturer said mine is too neat, need to be more "free"~

3 comments:

brian said...

i like to commment on the this piece is kind of "loose" style here but the shape or shadow kinda flat between the guy jaw and neck
jus a suggestion of my ,try thicken the outline contour between the head and backrgound this may make the subject popup more and give more depth to it .sorry if i say something not right jus my 2 cent :)

brian said...

oh yeah i added your blog link to my
hope you drop by
here the link

http://mozzocity.com/wizmopark/

Kael said...

thanks alot for the comment, Brian! i got what u meant there, will try to fix it!

i'll add u in my list very soon, thx for the link!